英语翻译酒店VIP部门便是针对那些高消费的VIP客人Hotel DIY department aim at those high cost VIP customers.

英语翻译酒店VIP部门便是针对那些高消费的VIP客人Hotel DIY department aim at those high cost VIP customers.
英语翻译
酒店VIP部门便是针对那些高消费的VIP客人
Hotel DIY department aim at those high cost VIP customers.

英语翻译酒店VIP部门便是针对那些高消费的VIP客人Hotel DIY department aim at those high cost VIP customers.
aims 漏了个S
Hotel DIY department aims at the VIP customers who cost highly. 也可以这样写吧...

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