文如下:In the last few years,I think Ichanged a lot.When I was a primary school's student,after class over I used to go right home and do myhomework quickly.Then I playde computer games until my mother got back.Now,when the class over,I would li

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文如下:In the last few years,I think Ichanged a lot.When I was a primary school's student,after class over I used to go right home and do myhomework quickly.Then I playde computer games until my mother got back.Now,when the class over,I would li

文如下:In the last few years,I think Ichanged a lot.When I was a primary school's student,after class over I used to go right home and do myhomework quickly.Then I playde computer games until my mother got back.Now,when the class over,I would li
文如下:
In the last few years,I think Ichanged a lot.When I was a primary
school's student,after class over I used to go right home and do my
homework quickly.Then I playde computer games until my mother got back.Now,when the class over,I would like to do some sports,then go home.And these days I don't play computer games,I feel it's boring.
I'm interested in doing some reading.
麻烦把写错的地方和不好的地方指出来

文如下:In the last few years,I think Ichanged a lot.When I was a primary school's student,after class over I used to go right home and do myhomework quickly.Then I playde computer games until my mother got back.Now,when the class over,I would li
I think I've changed a lot in the last few years.When I was a primary school student,I used to go right home and do my homework quickly after class.Then i played computer games until my mother got back.Now,I'd like to do some sports after the class is over and then go home.And these days,I don't play computer games any longer,because i feel it's boring.I'm interested in doing some reading now.
in the last few years要用现在完成时态,
when the class over缺少动词

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我调整了下一些短句的顺序,为的是使文章更具连贯性;有些地方在保持原文意思的情况下作了些修改,望见谅。你看看有什么地方还不是很好的,可以给我留言。
I think I’ve changed a lot in the last few years. When I was a primary school's student, I used to go back home to do my ho...

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我调整了下一些短句的顺序,为的是使文章更具连贯性;有些地方在保持原文意思的情况下作了些修改,望见谅。你看看有什么地方还不是很好的,可以给我留言。
I think I’ve changed a lot in the last few years. When I was a primary school's student, I used to go back home to do my homework as quickly as possible. And then I played computer games until my mother came back. But now, I would like to do some sports before coming back. However, these days I don't play computer games any more, because I feel it's boring. Now,I'm interested in doing some readings.

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In the last few years,I thought I changed a lot.
I used to go rigt home and did my homework . Then I playde computer games until my mother got back 这是语法错误 应是not...until until不能单独使用 And these days I can't play computer games,so I feel it's boring.
总共三个错误吧