请帮忙检查一篇英语作文,一个初一的好朋友的作文.要我帮忙检查,我英语很烂 = ……有没有什么语法错误,或者用词错误的地方.A Review Of "The Adventures Of Huckleberry Finn"Huckleberry is protagonist of "The

请帮忙检查一篇英语作文,一个初一的好朋友的作文.要我帮忙检查,我英语很烂 = ……有没有什么语法错误,或者用词错误的地方.A Review Of "The Adventures Of Huckleberry Finn"Huckleberry is protagonist of "The
请帮忙检查一篇英语作文,
一个初一的好朋友的作文.要我帮忙检查,我英语很烂 = ……
有没有什么语法错误,或者用词错误的地方.
A Review Of "The Adventures Of Huckleberry Finn"
Huckleberry is protagonist of "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn".He is a clever white boy.For freedom ,he fled to Mississippi.In this process,Huckleberry encountered a black slave.The black slave's name is Jim.Jim is a hard-working black slave.Huckleberry hopes he can get freedom.So they choose a hard road.Ending,Jim gets freedom.But Huckleberry chooses go on this adventure.
The book expounds a kind of advanced thought.It tells us,we should slake racial discrimination.Everyone is equal.
I recommend the book.Because this book is a classical magnum opus.Mark Twain is an eximious author.He thinks everyone all self,doesn't have phyletic difference.We hope you think so,too.

请帮忙检查一篇英语作文,一个初一的好朋友的作文.要我帮忙检查,我英语很烂 = ……有没有什么语法错误,或者用词错误的地方.A Review Of "The Adventures Of Huckleberry Finn"Huckleberry is protagonist of "The
大致意思：
对《哈克贝利•芬历险记》
《哈克贝利·芬历险记》的主角是《顽童流浪记》”.他是一个聪明的白人孩子.为了自由,他就逃到密西西比.在这个过程中,遇到了《哈克贝利·芬历险记》黑奴隶.黑人奴隶的叫吉姆.吉姆是一个很用功的黑人奴隶.希望他能得到《哈克贝利·芬历险记》自由.所以他们选择一个艰难的道路.结束,吉姆得到自由.但《哈克贝利·芬历险记》选择玩这个冒险.
这本书阐述了一种先进的思想.它告诉我们的时候,我们应该消解种族歧视.人人平等.
我推荐这本书.因为这本书是一个经典的代表作.马克·吐温是一位著名的作家.他认为每一个人都自己,没有种族差异.我们希望你也这么认为.

初一这词汇量算不错了
我羞涩、

全对啊

感觉好多的断句都可以用连接词连起来，那样看上去比较连贯，。
ENDING是个名词，不可以当做连接词使用。可以用AT THE END.
a kind of an advanced thought..要加不定冠词，
It tells us that we should slake racial discrimination because everyone is equal.<...

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感觉好多的断句都可以用连接词连起来，那样看上去比较连贯，。
ENDING是个名词，不可以当做连接词使用。可以用AT THE END.
a kind of an advanced thought..要加不定冠词，
It tells us that we should slake racial discrimination because everyone is equal.
For freedom 改成to have freedom比较好 因为是他想要。
go on有点太口语了 用CONTINUE.

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Ending改成Eventually But Huckleberry chooses go on this adventure chooses 改成 decides
expounds 改成 expresses